After sending the first scene of my WIP novella to a couple of lovely people (I say lovely because they liked it), I've noticed that I have a serious problem with it.
The first third (of the 26k I've written) is how it should be; funny, sarcastic and a little dark. The rest though is merely dark and sarcastic. Somewhere along the line I screwed up the style and didn't notice. Until now.
I don't believe in editing until the first draft is done, so I'm not going to run back and prat about with things, but I think my first edit is going to be a major one.